I’ve been writing novels and short stories since the
late 1970s. I’m more comfortable with
the longer form. I’ve often asked myself
why this is.
Short stories can range in length from a few
thousand words to maybe 15,000 words.
Anything longer tends to be called a novelette or a novella by
industry. For round figures, let’s say a
short story should be less than 10,000 words.
That’s about 30 plus pages using average type and font. So the whole story has to be set up and
delivered in that length.
For comparison’s sake, the Science Fiction and
Fantasy Writers Association (SFWA) calls a short story something no longer than
7500 words.
Whether a novel or a short story, any story has to
have some kind of plot, with one or more characters, some kind of problem to
solve and some obstacles to solving it.
A novel is more expansive in laying this out. Here’s one of the main differences between
the two forms:
1.
A
short story sets the character right in the middle of the problem immediately.
A novel has some luxury in the way it opens, setting
the character in his setting and presenting him with a problem. In fact, there may be a rising crescendo of
problems in the longer form. You can’t
do that in a short story.
Short story writers have to be sparse with words,
extremely selective and make every word count and carry the story. No long soliloquys, no luxuriating in
philosophical discourses about the meaning of life and “what I did when I was four years old to make me the murderous sociopath
I am today.”
2.
In
a short story, the character usually faces one problem. It could be a big one or a small one, but
there isn’t room or time to build a number of problems up to some cataclysmic
ending.
Short
story characters run headlong into their predicament pretty quick, ideally on
page one. Fiction editors say (and most
readers would agree, I believe) that they want to be grabbed from the very opening
sentence. There’s truth in that for
novelists too, but with short stories, lay out the problem early and plunge the
main character in it like he’s taking an ice bath in Sweden in January.
Novels
can have subplots, all of which hopefully contribute to and lead to the main
character encountering and resolving (or not) the big problem. Short stories have one plot line and one or a
few problems. There isn’t time or space
for more.
Literary
historians say that short stories evolved from our oral storytelling
traditions, that is, from parables, fables, even anecdotes. They’re compressed and concentrated, though
they should have the same elements as any good story: exposition, complication,
crisis, climax, resolution. Sometimes
the resolution part is pretty abrupt, unlike a novel.
Short stories are not little novels.
The
third main difference between the two forms is this:
3.
Short
stories get written, published, critiqued and turned around faster in the
marketplace. Writers get faster feedback
from short stories.
In
my own case, I have found that my particular talent, such as it is, needs a
longer form to stretch out and become manifest.
A short story is a closet, a novel is a veranda or a screened porch (if
you grew up in the American South as I did).
You can’t relax with a short story.
You have to squeeze every bit of story you can out of every single
word. Thus, writing short form fiction
is a great discipline for any writer, however successful they may be at
it.
Now
to answer my original question: why do I personally prefer novels to short
stories?
I
like being able to explore a fictional world (especially important in science
fiction) in detail and I like being able to explore more than one character and
from more than one direction. I
particularly like developing parallel plot tracks that intertwine and support
each other and come together in the end to slam the reader with one big aha!
It’s like juggling a lot of story “balls” at the same time but when it
works, it’s a sight to behold. It resonates.
Hell, it virtually twangs with
meaning, like a guitar string vibrating with harmonic frequencies. I know that sounds corny but the great
novelists can do that. As for me, I’m
still learning.
I
write novels more than short stories and enjoy them more because I feel
comfortable in them as a storyteller.
One day, I’ll put some of my short stories up on Smashwords.com as a
collected work and you can judge for yourself.
Some of them still read pretty well.
But
I still like the novel form better.
Next
week, we’ll look at how my upcoming Nanotroopers
series has started out. I’ll be
uploading Episode 1 “Atomgrabbers” on or about January 14. Look for it at Smashwords.com under Science
Fiction > Military.
See
you on January 19.
Phil
B.
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