Tuesday, January 19, 2016


In this post, I’ll excerpt the first scene from “Nanotroopers”, Episode 1, which was just uploaded to Smashwords.com last week.  Here it is….

“Colorado”

Colorado Springs, Colorado

August 2, 2047

2:15 p.m.

Johnny Winger was in Net School, working with Katie Gomez on some algebra problems, when he learned his mom had been killed in a car crash.  The message was from a deputy at the El Paso County Sheriff’s office…one of the worst crashes we’ve seen in years, a deputy had said on the vidpost.  Car went off a cliff, rolled down an embankment, burst intoyour father’s at the hospital now--

Johnny snapped the post off.  He didn’t want to hear any more.  He just wanted to go.  Be there. See for himself. 

The school let him out without any questions. Principal Costner tried to be sympathetic.  “Go on, son …get out of here.  We’re praying for you—“ He swung his legs over his turbo and fired it up, gunning the engine angrily.  Then he scratched off out of the parking lot and made his way screeching and sliding through several traffic lights to the autoway, heading north.  Dad was alive, barely.  In a hospital.  Colorado Springs. 

He just had to be there.  And he wasn’t going to give up control of his turbo to the autoway, not today of all days.  He needed to be in control, feel the road vibrations and the wind, know for sure there was something he could control.  Johnny Winger steered into the manual lane and cranked his bike up to just under a hundred.  Cars and trucks and road signs flashed past.

He made the Sisters of Mercy Hospital in about half an hour.

The hospital was a Greco-Roman institutional brick pile, all fake columns and turrets and gables, some architect’s wet dream gone awry.  The ten-story main building poked up above a small forest of aspen and birch trees, in a hundred-acre park-like setting out along Powers Avenue.  Johnny skidded his turbobike to a halt and parked in a delivery van’s spot, then hustled inside.

He found his sister Joanna in the CCU waiting room.

Joanna was an inch shorter, short blond hair with some locks hanging over her right eye.  “They just brought Mom in.”  She held up her wristpad.  “I was just talking with the funeral home…she died quickly, Sheriff’s deputy told me.  They’re taking the body over there this afternoon.”

Johnny felt a hard lump in his throat.  His eyes were dry, for the moment.  Joanna’s were red.  He figured tears would come later.

“What about Dad?”

“Just out of surgery…skull fracture…he may have some brain trauma, the docs said.  He also has a broken arm, some spinal contusions…Johnny, it’s a miracle he survived.  From what that deputy said about the crash scene—“

Johnny put both hands on her shoulders.  “I heard.  Let’s do details later—“he stopped when the door to the waiting room opened.  A nurse in blue scrubs poked her head in.

“You two can make a short visit now…very short, like five minutes.  Your Dad’s semi-conscious, just coming out of sedation.”  She held the door back and they went in.

The Critical Care Unit was on the fifth floor, north wing.  The waiting area had been half full, with small knots of people engaged in whispered conversation, two children joysticking remote action bots along the wall, and a wraparound active display showing live scenes from Vail and Aspen and Steamboat Springs.  The nurse showed Johnny and Joanna down a hall to the Active Care Unit.  Through the bioshield, a sort of containment zone inside of which active nanodevices were at work, Johnny came up to the bed where Jamison Winger lay enveloped in thick ganglia of wires and hoses.  Joanna hung back, her hands to her mouth.

A faint coruscating blue glow surrounded the bed, the inner containment field pulsating with active nano to protect the patient from further infection.

A swarthy Egyptian doctor, Sethi Hassan, attended a small display, with imaging views showing what the bots were seeing.  Two nurses also attended.

Dr. Hassan sensed the presence of someone new, but did not at first look away from the screen.  His right hand manipulated a tiny trackball and the view on the screen changed with each manipulation. 

“How’s he doing, Doc?” Johnny asked.

“About as well as could be expected,” Hassan said.  He had just finished some tests and scans, looking for peritumoral edema, any headaches, intracranial pressure, hemiparesis, tremors.  Every test had turned up better than expected.  “Frankly, Mr. Winger here’s doing a lot better than he should be.  We still have some work to do, more surgery, basically repairs and reconstructive sessions.  He’s suffered substantial trauma to the frontal and parietal lobes.  After that, more tests…memory function, basic motor skills.  You’ve got five minutes, no more.”  With that Hassan retreated to a small control station by the door.

Winger bent over the bed, pressing lightly against the field.  A keening buzz changed pitch and invisible forces pressed back against his fingers, forcing his hand away.  Standard mobility barrier, he told himself, almost without thinking.  He’d read about bots like this on the Net just the other day.  He moved aside to let Joanna come closer, then drifted toward Hassan’s station.

“Doc, what do all these bots do?”

Hassan sighed, flexed his fingers around the trackball at his panel and did some more manipulations, delicately driving the medbots under his command. 

“Two hours ago, we perfused his brain with a small formation of neurocytes…these neurocytes are working now.  I detached a small element just an hour ago, got them into position to block a serotonin avalanche that was firing off inside his limbic system…some kind of seizure, that was.  We got the convulsions mostly stopped…although there’s been some leakage into the hippocampal regions.”

Winger studied his father’s face.  His eyes were screwed shut, tension lines all converging along his forehead.  He was clearly still in pain.  His lips trembled and a rhythmic twitch made his fingers and feet move in fits of shaking.  His head was wrapped in bandages.

Mr. Winger started to convulse—his arms and hands went rigid, then spasmed fluttering off into the air, brushing against the barrier.  The mechs buzzed back.   Beside the bed, Hassan busied himself driving the herd of neurocytes onward, tracking down the errant discharges.  Seconds later, as he swarmed the ‘cytes toward the center of the convulsion, the spasm gradually died off.  Mr. Winger’s arms dropped, his fists unclenched.  The doctor looked up; his eyes saying that was too close.

“We’re running the latest here at SOM…Mark III medical autonomous assemblers.  AMADs.  Most of the exterior trauma’s already stitched up…that went pretty well, I must say.  But hunting down these spasms and figuring out the firing patterns, timing the cascades and the uptake rates…that’s taking time.  I’ll get it figured out eventually…if we can keep him stable for the time being.”

Joanna leaned over the bioweb and sighed with sadness.  “Brad’s flying in from Frisco tonight.  One of us needs to pick him up at the airport.”  Brad was the oldest of the Winger kids, now a resident at Stanford Medical. 

“I just have my bike…Brad won’t want to ride that.”

“I can go,” Joanna offered.  “If you’ll stay here with him…you’ll have to sign some paperwork when they bring Mom in.  And Dr. Hassan may have questions about further treatment.”

That’s how it was decided.  Joanna and Johnny ate a quick and tasteless meal at the commissary, consoled each other for a few moments over cake and coffee and then Joanna was off.

Johnny went back to CCU.  Slouching on a beat-up vinyl couch, he googled ‘AMAD’ on his wristpad and studied the images and the reports, browsing and skipping quickly through the details.  At any moment, he expected to get another five-minute visit with his Dad and he had a few questions for Hassan and the second shift surgeon, Dr. Morse.  He kept one eye on the double-doors to the trauma suite and one eye on his screen….

‘Autonomous nanoscale assemblers…the bots sport quantum processors…unique operating parameters…surgeons need special skills to run the bots…working at the scale of atoms takes a different mindset…it’s like a carnival ride down there, with van der Waals forces and Brownian motion….’

Winger watched a small snippet of video, taken from a bot’s acoustic sounder inside a living brain.  Someone was narrating….

“Right now, Dr. Volk is steering AMAD into the vascular cleft of the membrane.  He’s twisting his right hand controller, pulsing a carbene grabber to twist the cleft molecules just so, now releasing the membrane lipids, slingshotting himself forward.  Now, AMAD seems to be floating in a plasma bath…there are dark, viny shapes barely visible off in the distance.  The plasma is a heavy viscous fluid.  Dr. Volk is tweaking up the propulsor to a higher power setting and taking a navigation hack off the vascular grid….”

  Johnny found himself mesmerized by the scene.  That would be so cool to do that, he told himself.  Just a few weeks ago, he’d met with the guidance counselor at Pueblo Net School, Mr. Holley.

To say that Mr. Holley was fat was like saying Mt. Everest was tall.  He squinted through folds of fat around his puffy eyes at a small tablet.  “It says here on your forms that you’re interested in Engineering.  Mr. Winger, I’m sure others have told you that to get into Engineering school, some place like Stanford,  Cal Tech, Michigan and so forth, you’ll have to get those marks up.  To be honest, Mr. Winger, most of the basketball team has higher marks than this…especially in Math…what is it with Math anyway?  Don’t you like numbers?  Your whole ten years at Net School, you’ve struggled.”

Well, he had only heard that about a million times.  He’d developed a set litany of responses.  “Numbers don’t like me, Mr. Holley.”  That was Number Fourteen.  He had dozens more. 

Now, watching the video on his wrist, watching some surgeon whose name he couldn’t even pronounce, joystick his way through a living brain, riding heard on a platoon of nanoscale bots like really small cattle, Johnny Winger had a moment’s inspiration, a vision handed down from the future he would tell himself later, of doing the same thing.  Grabbing atoms and fighting off viruses and disassembling oligodendrogliomas like the U.S. Cavalry…that he actually could see himself doing.  Numbers…shmumbers…maybe this was something he ought to look into.  After all, Dad had been beating on his head that he had to start thinking about his future after Net School.  Maybe this….

Dr. Morse, the late-shift surgeon, cleared his throat.

Ahem…Mr. Winger….”

Johnny jumped a foot.  He didn’t even realize someone had been standing next to him.

“Huh--?”

“You can visit your Dad for several minutes, if you want.  He’s resting now…”

Johnny went in.

The bioweb was still up, flickering a faint white-blue.  Johnny knew he couldn’t physically touch his Dad.  Jamison Winger’s head was half-covered in a sort of helmet-like device.  Johnny looked up questioningly.

“A docking station for medbots,” Dr. Morse explained.  He stepped away from a rolling console that was positioned next to the bed.  “We’ll be doing an insert in another hour, trying to hunt down and fix neural pathways that were damaged… imagery shows some pretty serious peritumoral edemas in several regions.  We’re going to try and fix them tonight.”

Winger leaned over to look at Morse’s console.  “I was just watching a vid about bots like this.  This is pretty new stuff.”

“State of the art,” Morse told him.  “We’ve been using medical nano-robots for surgeries for several months now.  It’s cleaner than invasive, more accurate that endoscopic.   In fact, we’re still training our staff…there’s an artificial body just down the hall…in the training suite.”

Winger looked over his Dad.  His face seemed at rest.  No more tension lines, no more tightened lips or strained cheeks. There was really nothing he could do at the moment anyway…but pray.  And hope Morse and his staff knew what they were doing. 

“You expect to be using these bots more and more.”

“Sure,” said Morse.  He went back to his console.  “Once we get all the kinks worked out…oh, don’t worry…we’re not doing anything unusual tonight.  We’ve used bots to repair neural damage dozens of times now.  In fact,” Morse kind of half smiled, “Sisters of Mercy knows more about these bots than just about anybody…and that includes Quantum Corps.”

Johnny’s eyebrows went up.  “Quantum Corps…I’ve heard of them.  Some kind of UN agency?”

“Exactly.  They use bots all the time…in fact, that’s their mission, from what I hear.  But we’ve got way more experience with this kind of stuff than they do.  In fact, I just saw an ad the other day…they’re looking for applicants now.”

“Really.”  Johnny stood up and went to take a closer look at Morse’s console.  “Can you show me what these little buggers can do?”

Morse studied the teenager closely.  “I can do better than that.  There’s a training session scheduled for second shift tonight…around 2100 hours, I think.  If you’re around CCU, come down to room 5125.  I’ll give you a temporary password.  We can do a little demo for you…show you what’s happening with your Dad later.  It’s really quite extraordinary.”

Johnny looked at his Dad.  Recovery would take weeks, maybe months, and that was if Morse could make his repairs.  Then would come months of rehab.  “I’ll be around most of the night.  My sister’s picking up my older brother at the airport tonight.  They’re coming straight here but it’ll be several hours.”

Morse deftly shoo’ed Johnny out of the room.  “Go get something to eat.  Then come to 5125.  I think you’ll be impressed.  Your Dad’s getting the best care we can provide…come watch.  It’ll put your mind at ease.”

Johnny promised to do just that.

 

The training suite was down the hall and around the corner from CCU Critical Surgery.  Johnny got through the security barriers with Morse’s temporary password with no trouble.  He came into a room dominated by a large hemispherical tank, draped with thick ganglia of cables and tubes, surrounded by control panels and consoles.  Overhead, a tray of strange gun-like devices hovered over one end of the tank.

“Electron beam injectors,” said a voice from behind him.

It turned out to be a white-jacketed technician.  His name plate read Stefans.  He was a burly and bearded fellow, clad in latex gloves and a white cap as well. He was built like a lineman, which he had once been eons ago.  Now there was a substantial paunch around his belly; what had once been muscle was now sagging into middle age.

“You were wondering what that was,” Stefans went on.  “Protective measures…in case the little critters get loose…and start multiplying.”  Stefans stuck out his hand and formally introduced himself.  “Dr. Morse told me you might show up…sorry….about your Dad, I mean.   But he’s in great hands down the hall.”

Johnny looked around.  “This is all for training…on these bots?”

Stefans nodded proudly.  “Want to give him a test drive?”

Johnny looked over the console.  “Can I?  For real?”

“For real.  Sit there.  I’ll go over the basics.”  Stefans explained that the tank was a containment structure and inside was a device called an Autonomous Medical Assembler/Disassembler.  “AMAD for short.  Here, I’ll show you—“

"I don't see anything."  Johnny stared intently at the imager screen. 

Stefans sat at a console next to the tank.  “We call it TinyTown.” He tweaked the sensitivity controls of the quantum flux imager.

"Keep watching, son…you will, soon--"

The image on the monitor sharpened slightly.  In focus in the center of the screen was a rectangular grid, wavering in the aqueous solution in which the grid was submerged.  Johnny studied the image carefully.

"Deflection at the probe tip is steady," Stefans muttered.  "That's about as close as we can get.  The grid is ready.  Let me check a few things…solution parameters are normal.  Pressure is twenty point two bars.  Temperature right on the curve.  PH normal.  Concentration gradient is what we expected.  You ready for the ride of your life?”

Johnny nodded.

Stefans rubbed his gray moustache.  "Activation instructions are coded and set for transmission.  Replication factor set for the template that's loaded.  Safety systems armed."

Stefans scanned the panel displays.  Poised around the periphery of the insulated tank in which the grid was suspended, were three rows of six electron beam injectors each.  At the slightest hint of trouble during operation, Stefans would quickly toggle the firing switch on the control panel.  Several million electron volts of energy would flood the tank, stripping atoms from molecules, and electrons from atoms.  Only a cloud of nucleus fragments would remain.

"Now we’re set…injectors are ready,” Stefans said.  He pointed to a small joystick.  “You drive AMAD with that.”

Johnny wrapped his fingers around the small stick.  He indicated the device on the screen, clinging to a scaffolding like grapes on a trellis.  “I’m driving that?”

“You will be a moment.”

Johnny flexed his fingers.  He was practically licking his lips at the prospect of playing with this thing.  "You said you've improved a few things.  What exactly do you mean?"

Stefans pointed to fuzzy projections on the screen.  "Along with a new processor, AMAD has stiffer diamondoid effectors.  More reactive or 'stickier' covalent bond ends too, basically carbenes and hydrogen radicals.  That lets him grab atoms and move molecules more securely."

"I can actually grab atoms with this thing…like sling ‘em around?”

Stefans smiled proudly.  "A little trick we've patented.  You can grab atoms and put them wherever you want.  You can also replicate…make as many copies of yourself as you want.  AMAD’s got new carbon group fold lines.  Basically a new type of architecture more easily cleaved and collapsed.  For patients like your Dad, it makes tracking down and removing damaged cells, tumor cells, whatever, much easier.”  

Winger tried out the control sticks on the panel. 

Stefans continued.  "This guy’s a real hot rod…optimized for faster folding and unfolding.  A very ingenious design, I should add…based on ribosomal proteins…nature's own assemblers of proteins from DNA instruction.  AMAD can break bonds much more rapidly, under quantum-scale control.  Orders of magnitude faster than ribosomes, I'm certain.  And he's got new fullerene 'hooks' for more secure grasping and attaching, which makes for better accuracy."

Johnny was anxious to get started, get a feel for this wonderbread gadget Stefans was so proud of.

"Am I powered up?  How do I start this thing?”

"Fully powered.  Just select a mode--here--" Stefans fingered a side panel.

Johnny settled into his seat, let his reflexes take over.  Though he didn’t know it, it was a basic axiom in nanoscale work that you didn't so much 'fly' the buggers as 'feel' them.  Stefans knew that to a rookie, dodging molecules and groping van der Waals forces was like playing dodge ball with a sleet of sticky balls.  It took timing and finesse, something that could only come with time.

"Layout's pretty straight-forward," Stefans went on.  "Operation controls you have your hands on are for the propulsors.  AMAD’s beefed up to sixty picowatts power.  Six degrees of freedom in attitude…that's your left hand plus translation control in your right."

"Feels jumpy," Johnny reported.  He twisted both sticks and the imager scene careened crazily.  "The slightest touch and he just takes off."

"I'm sure you'll get the hang of it.  I've got the gain boosted up high.  Imager is acoustic feedback.  You can overlay heading, attitude and state data on the image."  Even as he spoke, Johnny already had the imager screen tiled with shifting mosaics of information.

"You seem like a natural at this,” Stefans observed.  “Let's try to dock with something," he suggested, spying a few molecules drifting by. 

Johnny tickled the imager for better resolution and clucked at the view.  “There’s some kind of molecule floating by—“

"Why that looks like an old friend of ours.  Mr. Acetylcholine Molecule.  What say we scope him out for a parking place?  Go for it, son. Give it a try.  By the way, that's a covalent bond--"

"Oh--!"  Johnny grunted sheepishly.  The acetylcholine's carbon 'fingers' flicked AMAD away.  He'd approached on a poor vector and gotten bounced by the stiff bond forces.  "I'll just try--" Johnny grimaced, trying to regain control of the device.  "That's weird--molecule just up and spun me around…what gives?”

Stefans sniffed.  "Something new."  He pressed a few buttons on the keyboard.  "AUTO-RESET.  With something like acetylcholine, dopamine--complicated structures like that--it's best to let AMAD do the piloting.  This is fly-by-stick, electronically controlled.  It seeks equilibrium and calculates resistance instantaneously.  Let the computer and auto-maneuver system do the work now.  AMAD knows what to look for.  You sure you haven’t done this before?  It’s like you’re born to this.”

Johnny frowned.  "It seems easy…just twist here and it does that—“

On the imager, AMAD careened around like a beach ball.

"It’s not easy but some trainees just have a better feel for the forces involved. Frankly, what you’re doing right now is pretty amazing.  And working AMAD this way saves molecules from being smashed to bits by hotshot doctors.  Before, doctors would just fly in and smash and grab molecules. Bust up everything in sight.  Trust me, molecules don’t like that.  Now, with AMAD, docking with a molecule is essentially automated."

"What else can this thing do?"

Stefans pressed a few more buttons to inject additional molecules into the solution.  "Say you're in an alien medium.  Parameters unknown.  Try a basic replication cycle."

When Johnny looked puzzled, Stefans pointed out the right buttons and switches.

Then, with Stefans’ help, Johnny scoped out the medium with AMAD's sensors: pH, concentration gradient, pressure.  He toggled the 'rep' pickle on the left stick, one cycle.  In the blink of an eye, the imager screen jostled slightly.

"I'm waiting…nothing seems to be happening."

Stefans smiled.  "You missed it, son."

"What?"

"AMAD’s already replicated.  Check your state vector…here--" he pointed to a screen of dials and columns on the left.  "See what I mean?"

Johnny was dumb-founded.  "I'll be damned--this baby's a real hot rod.  And Dr. Hassan’s using this on my Dad…?”

“As we speak…he’s more experienced than you, of course.  But you’ve got talent…that much I can see right now.  You seem to be a natural at working with atoms and molecules.  It takes a special touch…not every doc or intern can come here and do what you’re doing right off.”

The thought had been forming in the back of Johnny’s mind for a few minutes.  “You mentioned that UN agency—“

“Quantum Corps?  Sure, they use the same technology.  I’m not sure exactly what they use it for…we sometimes run demos and seminars for them, advise them on things we’re doing here.”

Johnny studied the little device now caroming around the imager.  “I need to find out more about them.”

Stefans went over to a desk and pulled out a small disk.  “Here’s a little training vid we did for them…I think there’s some contact info on it.  It should run on your wristpad.”

Johnny pocketed the disk.  He would definitely check this out.  Maybe this Quantum Corps was the answer to all the questions that hippopotamus Mr. Holley had been throwing at him: you’ve got to make some decisions soon, son, about what you want to do with the rest of your life…Jeez.  Really, Mr. Holley?

 

A month later, Jamison Winger had been discharged from Sisters of Mercy and was back home again at the North Bar Pass ranch a few miles outside Pueblo.  And Johnny Winger had applied for an interview and a test at Quantum Corps.

Mr. Winger sat a bit unsteadily on a stool in the barn he had converted into a lab and workshop.  The bench and surrounding tables and shelves were crammed with parts, pieces of parts, loose wiring, circuit boards, and assorted actuators, motors and things that looked like disembodied legs and arms.  There were even a few robot heads stashed around, leering down at them like Halloween masks.  Jamison Winger was forever a tinkerer, even when he was supposed to be in rehab.

“I want you to do whatever your heart tells you to do, son… but Quantum Corps?  Really?  Do you even know what they do?”

“Sure I do…they operate the same bots that the doctors used on you…the ones that fixed all your injuries.”

Mr. Winger went back to a circuit board he was soldering.  “Not quite all of them…but I know you always liked bots.  You realize what this means…Quantum Corps is a military outfit.  You apply and get accepted and you’re committed for several years, at least.  Is this what you want to do?  Your Mom and I always figured you’d go to engineering school, maybe Stanford, like your brother…or Cal Tech.”

Johnny sniffed at that idea.  He’d fight to do anything other than what Brad had done.  They were always comparing him with Brad.  “I can get my schooling with the Corps…Dad,  I can go to the Academy.  I’d be an officer.  I’d travel around, see things.  Work with bots.  Grab atoms and fight off viruses, things like that.  It’s way better than—“

Mr. Winger put down his soldering gun, flipped up his safety glasses—you could still see a scar where the melanocytes hadn’t quite finished their work on his face—and said, “Than what, son…than this?  Working like a dog on the ranch—“

“Dad—“

But they were both interrupted by the clatter of hooves outside the barn door.  Soon enough, Misty, their brown and white Arabian poked her big snout in, guided by Joanna.  His sister had taken Misty out for a short ride along the lower passes.

Jamison Winger motioned his daughter over, after she had secured Misty and set her up with water and oats.  He explained what Johnny wanted to do.

Joanna just rolled her eyes.  “So what is this, some kind of glorified Cub Scouts?  Do you run around in uniforms and play shoot-em-up with the bad guys?”

Mr. Winger held up a hand.  “Jo…that’ll be enough of that.  It’s what he wants to do.  I just wanted to let you know…I’ll email Brad…he’s still stuck in residency at Stanford Medical.  If John here wants to join Quantum Corps, hey, I think that’s great.  I just want to make sure he knows what he’s getting into.”

Joanna wasn’t convinced.  “Mom would never go for this.”

Johnny came back, “How do you know?”

“Kids, kids…no more, okay.  The Old Man needs some peace around the barn…I’m working on a new flyer design…it’s no bigger than a fly.  John, go do your application.”  He turned to Joanna.  “And as for you, young lady, how about finishing what I told you to do...clean up the kitchen and the living room.  Then you can groom Misty and Marcy.  I might even go riding with you after lunch.”

Joanna agreed with that and Johnny sprinted back to the house.  An hour later, he had finished his online application to Quantum Corps and submitted it.  By supper time that evening—over beef barley soup and sandwiches—Johnny reported that the Corps had responded back.

He read the reply over the dinner table.  “It says ‘Report by 0800 hours on 22 June, 2048 to the Recruit Processing Center, Table Top Mountain, Idaho.  Bring all applicable identicards listed below, including a current healthchip and a week’s clothes.  Your contact will be Lieutenant Jeremy Wormer.’  Dad, can I take my bike, huh… what about it, huh?”

Jamison Winger sopped up some soup he’d dribbled on his chin.  He crammed a square of cornbread in his mouth and chewed, thinking.  You knew he was thinking when his eyebrows started canting down toward each other. 

“You’ve finished all your projects for Ms. Gomez?  Net School’s done?”

“All done.  My certificate’s already posted on their web site.  I can print it—“

Mr. Winger took another bite and sighed.  “No need.  I just wish your Mom were here.  You know she’d give you a big hug and a kiss.”

“Yeah, a big wet kiss.”

Joanna could just imagine it.  “Like Misty gives you, all tongue and teeth—“

“Okay, that’s enough.  Johnny, this is serious business.  You’re sure about this?  You’re sure you don’t want to shovel hay the rest of your life.  Or tear up all my inventions?”

Johnny knew a gotcha from his Dad when one came.  There was a kind of twinkle in his eye, a slight smirky lift to his lips. 

“I’m sure, Dad.  I know what I’m doing.”

Jamison Winger put his spoon down and arranged the utensils just so.  He’d always been a neat freak but after Ellen had died—well, it was one of a lot of things that had changed around the place.  “Then, don’t forget to write, son.  If they give recruits the time to do things like that.”

“I won ‘t, sir.”

The next day, Johnny cinched up a bag to the back of his turbo and sped off down the twisting gravel drive of the ranch.  He picked up I-70 a few minutes later and headed north for Denver.  And no autoway this time either.  He wanted to be in control of something…he’d always liked to be in control of things. 

Idaho was two states west, up through the Front Range and one state north.  The trip would take the better part of two days.  But he had his gear and he didn’t plan on sleeping any longer than necessary, just enough to rest up from the road. 

Table Top Mountain, here I come.  He throttled up the bike nearly to redline rpms and sped off toward the mountains, still snow-capped even in summer and silent, now beckoning him on to new and unknown places. 

***

So, now you’ve looked at the first scene of “Nanotroopers” Episode 1.  Let me know what you think.  You can read the whole episode at Smashwords.com.  By the way, it’s free.  And Episode 2 is only a few weeks away.   The early volume of uploads is good.  Episode 1 had started out strong and there seems to be a lot of interest.  Plus if you upload it, you'll see the  publishing schedule for the other 21 remaining episodes.

On my next post, I’ll detail what’s happening with my other major effort for 2016, my new science fiction novel called The Farpool.  I’ll give you a peek at what this series is all about and what you can expect to come in follow-on stories of the series. 

That’s it for now.  See you on January 25.

Phil B.

 

 

 

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